All applicants are required to submit a personal statement regarding their interests and/or intended areas of study. We don’t ask applicants to address specific questions in their personal statements, but we are hoping that this piece of writing will give us a sense of your educational background and your emerging research interests.
How long should it be?
As professors so often tell students, “as long as it needs to be.” There isn’t a “correct” length for a personal statement. But, really, most statements are about 700-1000 words.
Is this the same as your college essay when you applied to college?
Yes and no -- but mostly no. Choosing to begin a doctorate is very different from beginning an undergraduate degree. We want to get a good sense of who you are academically. Why are you choosing to get a doctoral degree? Why do you want to be a scholar, not just a student? Why now? Why Mediterranean archaeology? Why Brown? What have you learned or done that makes you think that a doctoral degree in Archaeology and the Ancient World from Brown will be an appropriate next step for you?
How can you make your personal statement stand out?
Don’t worry too much about making your statement “unique” or “special”. What makes a personal statement successful is that it is honest, and specific to you. Explaining why you are choosing to pursue a doctoral degree in archaeology right now, and describing your relevant interests and experiences may not seem flashy enough to you, but we assure you, it’s what we find most exciting. The more descriptive you can be about your interests and academic or professional background, the more we can ascertain whether Brown could be the right place for you to continue your education and professional development. You do not need anecdotes or journeys of discovery in your personal statement.
How “formal” should your writing style be in your personal statement?
As formal, or informal, as you’d like to be. We’ve read funny, sad, moving statements that were very effective, and we have read extremely successful statements written in a more professional, traditional, strictly academic style. Your personal statement is being read by 8-12 faculty members, so perhaps think of writing to a favorite professor. There is no “correct” answer to this question. It is more about what works best to convey the information about yourself and your academic approach and experiences. However, vulgarity and rudeness are unlikely to aid your cause.
Should you mention fieldwork?
Yes! Absolutely. Fieldwork is an extremely important part of our approach to archaeology. We are very interested in your experience, and what you hope to do in the future.
Should you describe your plans for a dissertation project?
No. Many programs encourage, or even require, applicants to enter the program already having a dissertation project underway. We require our students to explore a broad range of classes and topics, geographically, temporally, and thematically. Students whose interests are extremely narrow at the time of application will not benefit from this flexibility and broad training.
However, we do expect students to have specific interests and topics they would like to explore in more depth. These interests would typically be evidenced throughout all aspects of the application, from your transcript and resume to your fieldwork experience and letters of reference. We fully expect that interests are likely to grow and change over the course of your doctoral studies, but you should already have some particular areas on which you’d like to build.
Should you mention a specific faculty member you’d like to work with?
Not necessarily. Many programs match applicants with a specific faculty member to oversee their work from their first day in the program. This is not our approach. Ours is an interdisciplinary and collaborative program, in which students work with all our faculty members throughout their time at Brown.
On the other hand, our faculty are leading experts in their respective corners of the field, and if you are not excited by their research then you also will not be likely to thrive at Brown. Focusing on one member of the faculty with whom you wish to work exclusively is a bad idea, but talking about a few faculty whose interests combined give definition to your own is very persuasive. One of the criteria we keep in mind when reading your statement is whether Brown, specifically, is a good fit for your interests. You might bear this in mind when writing your statement, and could choose to address this explicitly by mentioning faculty or resources that you think would be particularly helpful to you -- but only include these sorts of references if they are sincere and relevant. There is no need to shoehorn in a mention to Brown just because you feel that it will help your chances.